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Post by steff on Mar 13, 2013 16:28:20 GMT -5
Stephanie Maria Belby If you're a beautiful freak no sleep, light the place up light the place up, yeah
Born to be, Stephanie Maria Belby
Call me, Steff [/i][/blockquote] I blow out my candles on, October 29Th
I'm pushing, 16
You can tell by my attitude I'm a,Scorpio
I' was born a, Witch
I tend to crush on, Boys
Due to my rents I'm a, Pure Blood [/i] [/blockquote] Sorting hat says I was born a,Slytherin
I'm in my,6Th
Work is overrated, N/A
Oh look it's shiny,Wand: 8 inches, Hippogriff claw, Cherry
They say I look like, Jessica Stam But I don't really see it- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You don't know your beautiful: Steff is a petite girl. She is a lot smaller than all the other girls her age, and it annoys her greatly. She has fiery red locks that run till her mid-back. In which she will either have pulled back into a ponytail or curled extremely to where it does not look very long. She has crystal-blue orbs that are bright and shiny. Her skin is very pale white and her cheeks are decorated with freckles. She wears black eye liner only to make her eyes stand out more and occasionally wear lip gloss. Otherwise she does not wear much make-up unless she is going to a special event.
She has a slender figure with a small chest to match her small size. When height gets involved she is 5 feet on the dot. Call her short and she will get mad at you. She normally wears the color green and blue. Those are her two favorite colors and seem to go well with her hair and eyes. She loves wearing her house colors. If not in blue or green she wears black and white. You will never catch her wearing red, beside her hair. Red is for Gryffindor’s and she is not.
What make me unique; Steff is very brave. She will go straight into trouble even if she is shaking and scared. She will show her fear, but will push it aside and do what needs to be down. She despises being called a coward. She. Is. Not. A. Coward! She will throw punches if you call her that. For some realize she see it more logically to punch then to pull out her wand and throw a spell.
This gal is full of energy and will be bouncing off the wall. People tend to think she is weird. This tends to make her think people judge her for it. She does not understand why though. She is just being herself. She does not see how it is a crime to be happy and yourself. She hates fake people, they annoy her. You might as well not try and friend her if you are not going to become be true friend. She is very good at reading people and finds those who are fake quick and kick them to the curve.
When you first think Slytherin, your thoughts come up to arse, right? Well Steff is not completely like that. She gets along with Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw just fine. She does not see them as a threat, but when it comes to Gryffindor she despise them just like the rest of the Slytherins. She is terrified of them, which is why he is an arse to them, but you will never hear Steff say that. She can be quite rude and a jerk to those she does not like and with her being good in charms, you do not want her as an enemy. To friends and family Steff is a sweetheart. She cares for them all. When Steff makes friends she is loyal to them and will stand beside they. No one will be able to make fun of them with Steff on duty! She will keep her ear peeled and if she hears something about her friends she will confront that person. She expects the same from them. Steff has not said something when people talk about her friends. So beware do not mess with those she calls her friends or her sibling. This is really weird for Pure-Bloods.
Yet, she is proud, arrogant, and ignorant to those she does not know. She can make others think that she thinks she is better than them, at time this is true. She likes thinking that her being proud and arrogant protects her from others trying to get a rise out of her. If she can protect herself she can protect those she is close with. That does not mean later she won't get upset about whatever was said and done, it just means she won't let them see it. She is ignorant to those she dislike, for why should she bother her time with them.
Steff is one to always try to succeed. She won’t give up on something or someone. She will always get up and try. Then, if she fails again, she’ll try again, but she will never give up. Giving up makes her feel weak.
She, also, does not have a great control on her temper. If she hates you she will make it clear that she does not hates you. Yet, if she does not like you she will be nicer to you unless if you make her mad. She is easy to friend, but she can also be easy to make an enemy of her. She will let her anger release on someone she dislikes and she is not screaming or yelling, but says hateful and rude things.
[/size] Likes; Being different Cats Flying Quidditch Pulling Pranks Potions Transfiguration Dancing Swimming Adventures
Dislikes;People being pricks Any sort of history Division Boring Days Exams Annoying people Being called small or short Gryffindors Seeing people being bullied Rumors
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Taking a peek into the past,Nationalities,British Birth place, London, Britain Current residence, London, Britain Mother, Julia Rosaline Hart Father, Marcus Raye Belby Siblings,_____ 17, Slytherin Brother
Pet,Orange Polydactyl (Extra toes) Tabby Ralph
Patronus, Wolf
Living the teenage dream,
Steff was born to the Belbys as their second child. She was always a ball of energy and showed magical at a very young, which you can image made the Belbys very proud and excited. I mean who wouldn't be. She came from a pure blood linage, so it would be a disgrace if she was not to show magic when she was young. She was brought up to be proper and with respect and she was to attack that way. Now Steff is nothing like that. Why she is home she act proper and respectful, but while at school she is herself.
Steff was always the one who would go out and have an adventure and not return until dark, which drove her mother fanatic that something happened to her baby girl. Of course she only every came home with a few scrapes or cuts, in which her mother fix on the spot. She could not have her daughter looking anything, but perfect. That annoyed Steff. While her father is always on her about not getting into trouble. The moment she acted up a bit he is down on her and harsh. So Steff is never out of control around him. She is calm and collected and it drives her insane.
When she turned 11 she got her letter. She was so happy. She wanted nothing more than go somewhere new and explores new areas of the world. Plus her mother would not be there fretting over her and her father would not press her about behaving. She was sorted into Slytherin she was happy, because it was something that her father would not scold her. She would have been in the house she ‘belonged’ as he would say. As a first year she started picking up on some Slytherin traits, like ambitious, proud, and loyal. Those she stuck with and she picked up some non-Slytherin like traits, like caring, hyper, and adventuring. Those traits have formed her into herself and she loves them.
Then, she noticed how Slytherin were showing distaste towards to Gryffindors, so she played follow the leader, just as the other first year Gryffindors did. So soon she found herself in fight with other Gryffindors, started from both sides. Soon the hatred grew inside Steff and knew she could never get along with those kitty cats, so she did not even try. As for the other Slytherins she got along with them great. She never found any flaws with them. They were perfect in her eyes, just as she thought she was perfect herself.
When Steff returns home from school she is a completely different person when around her parents. She is calm and collected about everything she does. If her parents ask her to do something, she does it instantly, as she just wants to make them proud of her. Yet, the moment she leaves the house, which is often, she is back to her normal self. She can only hold herself in for so long before she explodes. She hates how she has to hold herself back and not be herself, but she wants to make her parents proud of her, I mean who wouldn’t. [/size] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I like to be called, Steff.
Forever young, 20
Time is of the essence, Eastern [/i] [/blockquote] I also play, None
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Post by EVA LEIGH WEST on Mar 14, 2013 8:47:34 GMT -5
[/size] She looks great so far, Steff, but there are a few things you might want to take a look at before she can be sorted for game play.
You need to add in her actual height. You said she was as small as a fourth year, but that doesn't really say how small she is.
Her personality makes me think she is much more of a Gryffindor than a Slytherin. Maybe think about adding in a few more Slytherin-like qualities, or changing her house. I know the canon list says she is a Slytherin, but we can easily make that a Gryffindor for you, if you’d prefer, or any other house.
For her history, you need to add more to it. Add in some stuff about her time at Hogwarts so far; how she's changed, how she's grown. Has she become more Slytherin-like during her time here? I noticed at the end of her history you said that she was confused about her sorting because she didn't think she was very Slytherin-like. Also, you may want to add in a bit more about her home life, both during the holidays and summers as well as before she came to Hogwarts. It would be helpful, especially for anyone who wants to make her older brother in the future. And how old is he, by the way?
I am also curious about why the Gryffindors would harass her for no reason, other than being a Slytherin, to cause her to hate them so much. Maybe add in some stuff to her history about that? Might give us a better feel for why she dislikes them so much.
And, as you go through and fix all that, maybe run a grammar and spell check? Believe me, I know how easily a typed word that spells another word can be missed. I do it often myself.
If you have any questions, please feel free to PM a staff member. Our accounts can be found on the sidebar with the lovely gifs Krys made.[/justify][/size]
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Post by steff on Mar 14, 2013 17:57:04 GMT -5
Like that?
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Post by ALBUS SEVERUS POTTER on Mar 15, 2013 10:04:34 GMT -5
Everything looks great. Lovely job, Please go make your claimed and welcome to Death Before Dishonor. <3
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