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Post by trenton on Jan 30, 2013 15:14:44 GMT -5
Trenton James TrelawneyThere is a Brotherhood of Man, A Benevolent Brotherhood of Man, A noble tie that binds All human hearts and minds Into one Brotherhood of Man.
Born to be, Trenton James Trelawney
Call me, Tren, Trent, Professor, Professor Trelawney [/i][/blockquote] I blow out my candles on, April 1st
I'm pushing, Twenty-five
You can tell by my attitude I'm a,Aries
I' was born a, Male Wizard that is a seer
I tend to crush on, The lovely ladies
Due to my rents I'm a, Half [/i] [/blockquote] Sorting hat says I was born a,Gryffindor Alumni
I'm in my,Um I graduated people
Work is overrated,Divination Professor
Oh look it's shiny,Wand: Alder Wood 12.5" Unicorn hair
They say I look like, Daniel Radcliffe But I don't really see it- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You don't know your beautiful: Dark brown hair and standing at five foot eight feet stands Trenton. Trenton loves to keep his hair messy and doesn't mind it. In fact he runs his fingers through it to make sure it's still messy. He has thin lips and tends to show off his wonderful smile. He tends to wear jeans and some sort of t-shirts. And over that some odd sort of hand made robes that well look like they've been handed down to him. He has bright blue eyes. He has some scruffy whiskers on his face which kinda makes him look older.
What make me unique; People could say that I'm a little crazy. I don't mind that one bit. I mean if I wasn't strange then would I be normal? And I think being normal is over rated anyways. Sure I'm kind and loyal but I'm a bit crazy and wild. I don't tend to follow the fashion trend at all. I tend to do my own thing in life. That include how I teach as well. I may be strange but hey that's how my mother taught me to be like. After all for most of my life it was just her and me. I fear that someday I'll be fired for my wacky ways of teaching. I tend to be a bit naive and trust a lot of people. But I enjoy making people laugh. I'm optimistic and try to look at the bright side of things.
Well my mother taught me to be myself when I first met her in my third year anyways. I've been raised not to show my true self when I was being raised by my grandmother with my twin sister because my mother rather not raise us because she needed to get money for us. Other then that I'm a pretty nice guy who does have an angry side to him. He does get mad and when he gets mad he yells and he tends to punch a pillow in his room where no one could see him mad. If he is teaching he'll just walk out of the classroom and go outside and just let out a big huge yell but he would never ever hit a child. And my twin sister is my main weakness.
If anyone messes with her I'm pretty much broken when it comes to someone hurting her. I don't like seeing her sad. She is the one thing that keeps me from going really crazy. I'm crazy as one could be without taking it so far. I'm the loyal type person and will take a stand for my family. I tend to dream a lot so a lot of what I see I can't really tell which one is true and which is not and hope that they aren't. Being a seer at times has it curses but I don't mind being a seer I just don't really let people know that I am one. Cause otherwise I will never be left alone. I can say though that only one of my predictions had came true and that is all I'm going to say.
[/size] Likes; Insert 7-10 likes. Teaching Being a Seer (Even though it may have skipped him and he doesn't know it yet) Girls Butterbeer Quidditch Games Candy Pranks
Dislikes; Spiders Snakes Heights Losing Cheaters People making fun of his talent His hair neat
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Pet, Hannah, Orange Tabby
Patronus, Rabbit
Living the teenage dream,
Trenton was born to Sybil Helena Trelawney on April first. No one really knew that Sybil even had a son yet alone two children. Sybil had an affair with Steven Henderson. Sybil never heard from Steven after their affair like he just disappeared into thin air. Sybil had her mother raise her two children while she taught at Hogwarts to get money for her two kids. She knew one of these days she would see them again. She stayed away from her two kids. Thinking it would be better if they aren’t around her seer’s mind set. So Trenton and his twin sister Tiffany went to Hogwarts they didn’t recognized their mother at all. Mainly because she hardly came down from the tower.
Before he did go to Hogwarts however Trenton was the kid who pretty much who got into trouble with his grandmother over and over again. Not really meaning to be in trouble with her. One day though he had suddenly had a vision. Not that he knew what that was but it had frightened him. He saw his grandmother laying on the ground having a heart attack because she found them gone during the summer due to another woman. A woman who looked like Tiffany but wasn’t Tiffany. This lady had glasses and wild hair and didn’t know where they were at all. He had ran over to his grandmother and told her about it and she started to get worried about him. But she had soothe him down and told him that wasn’t going to happen at all.
When he started to go to Hogwarts however he got sorted into Gryffindor. Now he was the kid who never really interacted with the other students at all. He was the one who would just sit in the back and be quiet due to the fact he didn’t want people to think he was crazy. Because he said odd things around certain people. Well people all ready thought he was weird he didn’t need crazy on top of that. In his third year however he decided to take Divination and that was the first time he met his mother. His mother then told him that she, Professor Sybil Trelawney, was his mother. He was mad for a while on why she couldn’t raise his twin sister and himself. The years came and went. He had made tons of friends with in Gryffindor but didn't really keep in touch with them. He hadn't ever had a girfriend but is still looking for one. He graduated with top grades pretty much in the Divination section of the course so he figured that would be a good place to go. After Hogwarts though he traveled the world and took in the sites.
The day Harry Potter died she had decided to retire. So he took over the position cause to him it seemed cool. He became a pretty good Professor. The students seem to love him that was for sure. But not at the beginning they had loved his biological mother. He doesn’t blame them though cause when he first met her he loved her. He was doing this job for her. And himself it seemed to be a good place to be. For a crazy person that is. To teach children if they have the power of being a seer. But then again those are rare so then he teaches those who want to know how a seer works. And maybe then they’ll just develop from that.
[/size] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I like to be called, Mea
Forever young, 29
Time is of the essence, Pacific Time Zone [/i] [/blockquote] I also play,Tru Coote, Lucille Weasley, and Harley Goyle
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Post by EVA LEIGH WEST on Mar 20, 2013 16:43:58 GMT -5
[/size] He looks great, Mea, but there may be just a few things you will need to take a look at and edit before he can be accepted.
First off, you forgot the 3-6 lines of lyric for the app.
You might also want to notate somewhere that he is a seer, either where you say he is a male wizard or that he is a half-blood. You only make a mention if it in the history when you said he predicted Harry’s murder.
And, as far as the prediction of Harry’s murder, you will need to get admin permission to do that. Part of me wants to say that, should another prediction have been made about harry, it would have been taken very seriously. I know it isn’t on the special abilities list yet (that’s still a work in progress) and predictions made by a seer needs to be admin approved.
You may also want to add a little bit more to his personality. For someone of twenty-five years, he doesn’t seem to have a whole lot to him. Maybe add what some of his strengths or weaknesses are. Is he creative, stubborn, a dreamer; maybe one more paragraph to tell us a bit more about the type of person he is. Maybe how his students view him, since we know he likes to teach.
You list in his likes that he likes being a seer, even though he doesn’t know if it’s skipped him, yet in his history you say he had a prediction that ended up coming true (Harry’s death). Could you add a bit more clarification on that, please?
He dislikes heights, yet his classroom is in the towers; I am curious how he handles that. Does it bother him a great deal, or has he managed to deal with that because he is safely in a tower and not outside looking down at the ground?
You may also want to add a bit more to his history. Unless it is just the wording, it seems that you jump from his 3rd year of school to him teaching. That would be about 12 years’ worth of his life that was skipped over. Did he become a professor right after he got out of school? If not, what did he do in between leaving school and teaching at Hogwarts? Has he made any other predictions (also need to be admin sanctioned)?
And that is it. If you are unsure about anything, don’t hesitate to contact a staff member. Can’t wait to plot and post with him! :][/justify][/size][/blockquote]
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Post by trenton on Mar 20, 2013 17:53:28 GMT -5
He's done. Just took a few things out add a few things hopefully he's done good. I've worked hard on him and I would really like to play a seer because I've never really had the chance too. The last time I did the site died pretty much off the back so yeah I've been wanting to play a seer for the past ten years I've been rping.
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Post by EVA LEIGH WEST on Mar 22, 2013 10:23:52 GMT -5
Nice app, Mea. Thank you for making those edits. Cannot wait to see him in action! Please go make your claims.
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