Goyle, Arialla Jade

Arialla Jade Goyle



"Put this under your skin
'Cause I am me and I won't change for anyone
Me and I won't change for anyone
For anyone like you"

Born to be,

Arialla Jade Goyle

Call me,

Aria or Ella

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I blow out my candles on,

October 4th

I'm pushing,

Fifteen

You can tell by my attitude I'm a,

Libra

I' was born a,

female witch

I tend to crush on,

Straight

Due to my rents I'm a,

Pureblood

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Sorting hat says I was born a,

Slytherin

I'm in my,

Fifth Year

Work is overrated,

Job, only applies for adults Student

Oh look it's shiny,

Wand: 12 inches, Dragon heart string, vine wood

They say I look like, Miley Cyrus But I don't really see it

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You don't know your beautiful:

Arialla has blue/green eyes, straight light brown hair which can look blonde sometimes and likes to curl it sometimes as well, 5'4" tall, with a light tan/peachy complexion. Her eyes are her best feature. She likes to wear vintage and some classy things but also has a rocker side to her as well. She likes to wear clothing that she likes, not what others would like. She is somewhat trendy but not to where he has to have it. She loves the colors black, pink and purple the most.

What make me unique;

Arialla is outgoing, rebellious, flirty, smart and friendly. She hates to be underestimated and will go to any extent to prove someone wrong. She loves music and loves to sing. She fears spiders, isolation, and rejection. Her goals are to graduate from Hogwarts and possibly be part of the ministry or become what shes always wanted to be, which is to be a singer but her parents would want her to be in the ministry much more.

Her weaknesses happen to be boys. She loves to flirt and if she finds one that shes attracted to, her mind is practically wrapped up around him. She's also not very good in charms or potions. Her strengths are in the Dark Arts, Transfiguration, flirting and being likable. Although having Slytherin parents telling her not to be friend with Gryffindors, she's friends with everyone that likes her back.

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Likes;

Butter beer, candy, watching Quidditch, boys, pranks and music.

Dislikes;

Spiders, raspberries, boring classes, rules, and sexism.

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Taking a peek into the past,


Nationalities,

English, German

Birth place,

London, England

Current residence,

London, England

Mother,

Shauna Chandra

Father,

Gregory Goyle

Siblings,

(not listed yet)

Pet,

Grey Tabby cat with blue eyes named, Aqua

Patronus,

Cat

Living the teenage dream,

Arialla Jade Goyle was born on October 4th in London, England. Her parents are Gregory Goyle and Shauna Chandra and she has three other siblings, one of her siblings is her twin sister. Arialla has always been the outgoing and reb ellious type growing up.

All of her friends were mainly boys and all of her haters happened to be girls. She wasnt exactly a tomboy because she does have a girly side. She loves to dress up when its a special occasion in dresses and heels, but if it was normal day to day stuff, she wore jeans and a shirt or skirts and a shirt.

The night after her eleventh birthday, Arialla received her letter to Hogwarts and that is when her parents told her about Hogwarts and what they expected of her. A year after attending Hogwarts, she had her first real boyfriend named Andrew. They dated for a year but sadly broke up because she caught him snogging another girl.

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I like to be called,

Megz

Forever young,

23

Time is of the essence,

Pacific Time, California

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Source,

ProBoards support

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I also play,

This is my first role here

PENDING!

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First off, welcome to the site, Megz. It is a pleasure to have you here. Before Arialla can be sorted, there are a few things you will need to edit.

You will need to add a little bit to her physical appearance section. You literally gave all of her basic stats in a single sentence, and then noted her best feature in one sentence, and then you wrote the most about what she wears. Another couple of sentences on her actual physical appearance would be great.

As for her personality, the app asks for a solid two paragraphs to give us a sound idea of what sort of character she is. You gave enough to make one solid paragraph, so you will need to add a bit more to that. And you listed that she was in Slytherin, as per the canon list states, but I did not get a Slytherin vibe from her at all. Slytherins are usually very ambitious, selfish, resourceful, cunning, power hungry, traditional, and determined. You should incorporate more of that into her personality to make her more Slytherin like. She seems more like a Gryffindor than a Slytherin with how you wrote her.

For her likes and weaknesses, the app asks for 7-10 of each, and you gave less than 7 for both. You just need to add one or more to each one to meet that requirement.

And, as I saw Holly mentioned in the cbox, you will need to add in ____ ____ Goyle and the age for all of the Goyle siblings listed on the canon.

And then you should add a bit more to the history too. The app asks for a solid three paragraphs, and you gave enough to make one. It also doesn’t really tell us what sort of life she's had prior to Hogwarts, and even to date. If she's a fifth year, she's been at Hogwarts for almost a full five years now, not to mention the eleven years prior to her coming to Hogwarts. You left the history off with her in her third year, since I assumed your mention of her first boyfriend a year after she started at Hogwarts was her second year. You said they dated for a year then caught him snogging another girl, so what's been going on with her in the last two years? Has she tried dating anyone else?

And that is it. If you are unsure about anything, don’t hesitate to contact a staff member. And when you are finished making those edits, just give a post below this one to let us know and someone will get to it as soon as possible. :][/justify][/size][/blockquote][/font]